Too Close to See Clearly . . .

Having just finished the first draft of my latest business book, FastBreak: The CEOs Guide to Strategy Execution, I am now at the part I hate the most, editing and revising.  I’ve exhausted the bulk of my creativity over the past several months constructing and writing, and now its over to the equally important, but much less inspiring part.  So, like any serious athlete or author, it’s time to hunker down, get disciplined, and plow through it.

Writing a book is really a marathon in three halves!  The first half is idea formation, research and outline.  All the basics are there:  beginning, middle, end.  Premise, data, conclusion.  A stack of examples and anecdotes ready to be inserted, somewhere!  This phase typically takes me about 3-6 months in total duration, but certainly not every day.  My method is to work intensely for a month just getting things organized, especially the outline, then put the project on my “back-burner” and get on with a few client consulting or advisory engagements.

Back-burner is a trick I learned a long time ago, akin to putting a sauce pot on the back burner of the stove, on low heat, to simmer so everything begins to assimilate and blend together.  For me I just shove my new outline and story ideas into the back of my mind, where things tend to percolate slowly and bubble up new insights from time to time.  Getting out with clients also brings my ideas into contact with the real world and helps me sort out real value from theory or half-baked ideas.

During this back-burner period I carry a small notebook and pen with me at all times; on the airplane, in a taxi, on the subway, during meetings, and especially by my bedside at night.  Ideas come bubbling up and connections between concepts can occur at the most random of times, so I am prepared (some are useful, others not, but at least I have them captured on paper).

Then comes the second half – writing the first draft.  This usually takes me about three months and I try to avoid any interruptions longer than a day or two.  I need to write everyday to keep the creative juices flowing and to keep a solid connection with my story line.  A book, whether it be a novel or a business book, begins to take on a life of its own and the story tends to germinate and grow inside of you.

It’s critical to keep the connection between brain and keyboard as open as possible.  Stopping for a few days to focus on other things tends to clog up my flow, so I power on, writing late into the night and early in the morning.  And like all authors, I set a goal to accomplish so much every day, usually a chapter (I write short chapters).  And I try not to edit too much, just get the whole first draft out as fluidly and as quickly as possible.

“Tell them what you’re going to tell them, tell them, tell them what you told them!”

So here I am at the third half of my marathon – editing and rewriting.  This is where I need to be disciplined, since it’s not so much about creativity as it is putting myself in the mindset of the reader (my intended audience for this book are CEOs, business executives, leaders of non-profits, anyone who must take a group into unknown or difficult situations to deliver a series of results or objectives).  I tend to reread each chapter, asking myself, would my intended audience really understand what I meant by this sentence? this passage?  this word?  I question everything from their viewpoint.

Experience has taught me there needs to be a significant time period between finishing the first draft and beginning the editing phase. Reason?  Perspective!  During the past three months of writing the first draft I have been, effectively, “smoking my own exhaust”.  Each day I keep thinking how great this book is, how clever my paragraphs are constructed, how easy the ideas are to follow.  It’s great, a best seller even before it’s finished! (the mind does play cruel tricks at times).  So I need to gain some distance, some objectivity, a clearer perspective.  I’ve been so close to the book and the ideas I can’t really see clearly anymore.

“Sentence first, verdict afterwords”  (with apologies to Lewis Carroll)

And it’s amazing and humbling when I come back to the first draft after a period of time and start reading it.  Sometimes I say to myself, “I can’t believe I wrote that convoluted, upside down, awkward sentence.  Boy, this is crap!” And other times I smile and nod approvingly.  With perspective  I am also able to spot the construction problems with the outline, my flow, my logic, the chapters.

So, here I am, head down, eyes straight ahead, fingers on keyboard, grinding out my rewrite.  Let’s hope one day soon we will both see the finished product: FastBreak – The CEOs Guide to Strategy Execution.

Tight Lines . . .

John R Childress

About johnrchildress

John Childress is a pioneer in the field of strategy execution, culture change, executive leadership and organization effectiveness, author of several books and numerous articles on leadership, an effective public speaker and workshop facilitator for Boards and senior executive teams. In 1978 John co-founded The Senn-Delaney Leadership Consulting Group, the first international consulting firm to focus exclusively on culture change, leadership development and senior team alignment. Between 1978 and 2000 he served as its President and CEO and guided the international expansion of the company. His work with senior leadership teams has included companies in crisis (GPU Nuclear – owner of the Three Mile Island Nuclear Plants following the accident), deregulated industries (natural gas pipelines, telecommunications and the breakup of The Bell Telephone Companies), mergers and acquisitions and classic business turnaround scenarios with global organizations from the Fortune 500 and FTSE 250 ranks. He has designed and conducted consulting engagements in the US, UK, Europe, Middle East, Africa, China and Asia. Currently John is an independent advisor to CEO’s, Boards, management teams and organisations on strategy execution, corporate culture, leadership team effectiveness, business performance and executive development. John was born in the Cascade Mountains of Oregon and eventually moved to Carmel Highlands, California during most of his business career. John is a Phi Beta Kappa scholar with a BA degree (Magna cum Laude) from the University of California, a Masters Degree from Harvard University and was a PhD candidate at the University of Hawaii before deciding on a career as a business entrepreneur in the mid-70s. In 1968-69 he attended the American University of Beirut and it was there that his interest in cultures, leadership and group dynamics began to take shape. John Childress resides in London and the south of France with his family and is an avid flyfisherman, with recent trips to Alaska, the Amazon River, Tierra del Fuego, and Kamchatka in the far east of Russia. He is a trustee for Young Virtuosi, a foundation to support talented young musicians. You can reach John at or
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3 Responses to Too Close to See Clearly . . .

  1. All inspiring John…


  2. MIchael says:

    Of the varied and many colleagues I’ve worked with over the past four plus decades … you are both uniquely qualified and the best equipped to pound out all three halves of your writing project – an important text on strategy execution. It will be excellent!


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